Brad's+Zero+Draft

My Story

Brief Explanation of my life/Half Fiction Going to Disney world with family the experiences going on all the rides waiting in the long line living in a cool Hotel spending time with family Adventures after school Run around Find bugs Race play tag Move out of old house Move in to my new house Going into high school Freshman

Any ideas about what kind of fiction stuff i could put in? Should I broaden or condense my topic? What are your critiques? Suggestions?

well first off when dose this story what year how old were u etc. 2nd do you think that your life in general is a big topic maybe you should choose just one part of it like you said going to disney world with family maybe something like that as your story